After this I decided not to ever put “guest666.exe.corrupted.rar” as a name EVER again. You’ll understand after this.


It was a normal evening, 4:22 p.m., or at least I thought it was. I decided to make a game about a psycho killer called “Guest 666”. And for the name I went for “guest666.exe.corrupted.rar”. Little did I know, it was a mistake.

5:00 p.m.

I’m starting to hear a buzzing/beeping sound.

5:15 p.m.

My login screen and my desktop wallpaper were changed.

5:16 p.m.

I forgot my middle name for about 23 seconds.

5:23 p.m.

My CP started spamming saying “Leave Page” or “Stay”.

5:26 p.m.

Legs starting to hurt.

5:29 p.m.

Forgetting things.

5:29 p.m.

CP has right time (normally 2 hours late).

5:31 p.m.

My eyes inverted colors.

5:32 p.m.

I’m seeing a little girl.

5:33 p.m.

Eyes keep inverting

5:36 p.m.

I think it went away.

5:38 p.m.

I have a headache.

5:51 p.m.

I couldn’t breath for about 6 seconds

3:00 a.m.

It’s over now. I can finally leave this prison. Called. HELL. It’s over. Finally. All. Over. Or. I. Hope. So.


As you could tell, I felt like I was trapped. Like in HELL. It was horrible. Horrible. Horrible. Finally over. DONT. DO. THIS.

What it is:

The DEVIL. A brain virus. A prison. A HELL HOLE. IT BREAKS YOU.





  • IronMosquito

    Eh. Wasn’t that great.

    • Daniel Di Benedetto

      Hey, man, do you have any idea when The Underground Part 5 will be posted? I’ve been looking forward to it.

      • IronMosquito

        Hey man, sorry for the delayed reply. I haven’t had a ton of time to write (thanks a lot, education), but I’ll try to get the new chapter up asap. I’m glad you’re still interested, though! It motivates me a ton.👍👋

  • Valdyr Loki

    You must have wrote this story while you were under the effect of the brain virus, because it’s one of the shittiest pieces of text I have ever read.

  • Daniel Di Benedetto

    Needs more depth and explanation. I’m pretty confused, honestly.

  • Advice from a pizza

    Are the messages that we’re reading what the protagonist is writing or is he describing what’s going on with him? Regardless, it’s missing a lot of meat on the bones. Also, the last bit seems shoehorned in and doesn’t really flow with the rest.

  • AUnknownA

    Holy christ that was horrendous.