Dark Nights to Remember

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A little about me. My name is Raven Watson💙. I was a normal 15-year-old girl with some problems, nothing I couldn’t handle, until that fateful day my whole life would changed. No for the better.

March 7, 2017

I am finally recovering from the most horrifying nights of my life. It has been almost a year since it happened. Well, I suppose if I am going to tell this story I should start at the beginning.

June 22, 2016,

I was home alone my mom, brother Zack, and sister Ruth were at a doctor’s appointment in the city about 3 hours away. They left early so when they hit traffic they wouldn’t be late. My little sister had a major skin condition where her skin would basically burn if she was in sunlight for even minutes. As for my father, I don’t know, when I was 10 he decided 3 kids were enough and ran away with his girlfriend.

They wouldn’t be home until the next day because they were staying the night at a hotel. My mom, Angela, was never good at driving late.

My house is a decent size. I go into every room on a daily basis, but one. My dad’s old office. He would always work in there, he was a local accountant, trusted by all. I would sit in my chair by his desk and he would teach me about his job. I loved the sound of his voice, the old music playing in the background, the smells of his coffee and apple scented candle colliding together. I loved when he would call me his purple princess. Now when I see the dusty door I feel dead inside I loved my father. His memory seems to fade from this house and this family more and more every day.

It all started when I heard whispering, faint but still apparent. It almost sounded like it was saying “Raven, run or I’ll get you.” I brushed it off as my mind playing tricks and turned the television up. I began to hear faint scratches on a door. I paused the TV and it seemed obvious the neighbor’s cat got in through the window again and wanted back outside. This wasn’t anything new, I looked at the back door and she wasn’t there. I looked to my right and there were words carved into the office door. “Raven, my purple princess💜” with a heart on the end. “I must be dreaming.” I said “This is mad!” I shouted. I hadn’t been in that room since my father said “I can’t do this anymore Raven, goodbye.” And shut the door. It never opened again, and I wish I hadn’t. I thought “This is exactly what happens in the movies just call the police and get out!” But something drew me towards the door. My hand touched the knob and I heard it, whisper “Yes Raven come to me.” I don’t know why but I turned the knob and pushed the door open. It was cold then it hit me. A familiar smell, the smell. I turned the lights on and it left. The record player was as I left it, everything was. “Those b*****s from school did this. Made me believe for their own entertainment! GET THE HELL OUT OF MY HOME YOU SICK ASSES!” I screamed, ” I’m calling the cops!” I returned to the living room and picked the house phone up and started dialing, when I hit call I placed it to my ear and instead of it ringing I heard ” I will leave with your unconscious body on the verge of death.” In an eerily calm voice and a laugh so unsettling I dropped the phone. The lights flickered and I fell to the ground I was dizzy. Then I saw it, a woman in the darkest corner of the room.

It felt like she was staring into my soul, my life, and my emotions. I didn’t feel scared or anything really I just stared. She the smiled revealing razor-sharp teeth and put her hand out. I was drawn to her. I got up on my feet and slowly walked over to her with my hand out. “Come with me if you wish to feel no more pain, sorrow, or anger.” I stopped

“Who are you?”

“Me? I am a friend here to help you. Save you.”

“Save me from what?”

She laughed a blood curdling laugh. “Yourself my dear.”

“What does that mean?” I asked hesitantly. I was but a few feet from her now moving an inch closer every few seconds.

“I know you, you blame your self. These sleepless nights knowing you dad has a new life, another little girl is his princess, smells that smell you miss so dearly, and gets the life you deserve. The nights you mom cries herself to sleep or drinks till she vomits. I can save you. All you have to do is take my hand and you will remain unharmed. Refuse, it will it hurt.”

“What do you want with me?”

In a much deeper voice she said “Your existence, or what humans call a soul..”


“You will come with me one way or another, choose wisely!”

“NO! LEAVE ME ALONE!” I screamed while backing away slowly. The woman lunged at me and grabbed my shoulders. I screamed in pain as her long sharp fingernails dug into my flesh.

“I’m going to make you feel pain, more than you ever have before.” She said she threw me to the ground. I had never felt so much pain in my life. I began to get up and ran to my mom’s room as fast as I could. I knew if I didn’t defend myself I would die. I grabbed the shotgun and loaded it. Just as door flew open shattering half of it. The woman walked in. I took aim and pulled the trigger. I hit her 3 times and she continued to advance. “Children shouldn’t play with such big toys, Raven.” She said almost as if she was my mother as she ripped the gun from my hands and broke it in half. “Are you scared? Well you haven’t seen anything yet!” She screamed.

“Get away from me!” I screamed. I knew there was no way I was gonna get out of this. I bolted for the window and just jumped. Didn’t even open it just rammed through. Luckily the was a patrol car on its way to the road drunk drivers use during the night. He saw me jump and was by my side before I knew it.

I have faint memories of him calling for an ambulance and backup when I mumbled “Someone’s in my house, sir.” I told him some more but it was illegible.

June 23, 2016

Next thing I remember I woke up in the hospital. The officer who saw me jump was there.

“Hello Raven I’m officer Daniels. How are you feeling?”

“Did you get her? Where’s my family?” I think I said it all too fast he gave me a confused look then said, we did not catch the invader and we cannot contact your mother or father.” He said professionally. “Don’t even bother with my dad. But what do you me you can’t contact my mom?”

“We’ve tried to call her and left her several messages but she has not answered.”

She’s in the city by now she is on her way home. You cannot let her in the house if she saw all the damage and blood she freak out.”

“Don’t worry we have a patrol car outside your house and an officer outside your room. We will catch the person who did this, Raven, I promise.”

“Thank you. Did you find the shotgun?”

“What shot-gun?”

“You mean…” just then someone began humming over his walkie-talkie. It was humming Ring a Ring o’ Roses. It was so eerie. Then a scream and I lost consciousness. I woke up a few seconds later and he had smashed his walkie-talkie. I had blood dripping from my ears. I couldn’t hear. He started to turn and yell out the door. It was all in slow motion for me. A nurse came in and I blacked out. I found out later I was bleeding from my ears, nose, and a little from my eyes.

That night I woke up yo an eerie moan.

I looked up and there was a woman again. Not the same one this one looked like a gypsy. I instantly hit the assistance button. “He is waiting for you love.”

I paused, “Who?”

“Father.” She remarked with a smile.

“What if I don’t go with you?”

“What happened when Monica visited but not as nice.” In an attempt to keep her occupied so I could continue pressing the assistance button I said

“Monica didn’t even try I doubt you will do any better.”

“Do you think that button will save your life? Father wants your soul real bad girly.” She said as she sat on my bed. “You see you are special, he picked you.”

“And what is your father’s name?”

“Our Father. Like I told you are special. You are the spawn of Lucifer himself! As I found out years ago. Monica isn’t our sister she is but a servant for us.”

“That’s impossible! I knew my father and…”

“Why do you think he left, Raven? He found out who you really are, but our father will except you for who you are. Come with me sister and we can hurt all those girls at school the way they hurt you.”

“I am not Satan’s daughter you are not my sister and this is all madness G******n it!”

“I know it’s hard to understand and I didn’t want to go either.” She began whispering, “But the amount of power is intoxicating.”

“Power corrupts.”

“I’m not going to hurt you. But Monica is. This time she’s going to try.”

Monica appeared on the opposite side of the room and the gypsy disappeared.

Monica ran at me and grabbed my leg and pulled and pulled. I screamed as loud as I could. Then I heard a snap and felt nothing. My ears started ringing and I looked up at Monica who had my severed leg in her mouth. The door was kicked open and Monica turned to dust. I looked at officer Daniels and slipped into unconsciousness.

June 24, 2016

I woke up, thinking it was a dream I tried to get up then realized it was gone. From the knee down on my right I had no leg. I pressed the assistance button and Officer Daniels walked in. “They had no other choice, Raven it was gone.”

“I know.”

“What happened? How the hell did this happen?”

“The same woman. She’s called Monica. She pulled on my leg until it snapped. I called out for help the woke time I used the button but no one came to help.” I began to cry. “Where is my mother?!”

“Raven I know this is traumatic but you need to collect yourself for me. We still can’t find your family. And there is no way a human can do that without some help. I’m going to go search every Monica I can so describe her to me please.”

I took a deep breath and said “She has long brown hair, she’s pale, she is about 20 or 30 years of age, and wears a long black dress.” I didn’t want to tell him about the other woman because I didn’t think believed me in the first place. “Thanks I’ll get back to you get better.”

“OK, I’ll try.”

I heard wispy voice say “Free me.” Then I saw a picture beside me. She was beautiful it was an old picture. It was Monica.

I needed a computer. I clicked the assistance button and asked for my laptop form home. After all I had been through the were happy to help. After about 30 minutes I got it. I turned the photo over and it said Monica Tucker. I searched her name and found out she was a witch. A good witch. She was hung for treason because she helped a wounded man who was a French soldier.

I did some digging and found she is my blood relative form my mom’s side. I knew I’d have to wait until night to face her. I only had a theory I didn’t know if it would work.

The next few hours I could only imagine what happened to my family. Monica, the gypsy, or worse Lucifer.

Night fall came and she appeared.

“I know now who you really are now.”

“You are no longer scared?”

“I know you are a slave. And I know I have control of you, so you are free now.”

“Very brave, thank you.” She said as she transformed into a ball if light and flew away. I heard a deep demon like laugh.

“Well done my daughter, you remind me if your mother. Speaking of which she is safe as are you siblings.”

“You don’t know me or my family!”

“Oh but I do, too well.”


“I may see all I wish my child.”

“I will never be your child! Go away!” I screamed as the door flew open and my father, the one from my childhood,started chanting language I had never heard.” And the room began to engulf in flames and the smell of hiring flesh filled my nose. My father carried me out and took me to a safe area outside and disappeared into the night. Before he left he said ” I do what I do for you, Raven. I love you my Purple Princess💜.”


My mom and siblings turned up. It seemed that lost time. I will never forget her fave when she ran into my hospital room. Her and Officer Daniels, Rick, got married. I’ve been trying to find my father. There is still no luck but I have faith. I still don’t understand what happened.

Only way I know it really happens is I only have one leg and still have Monica’s picture. I hope all of this doesn’t happen again.

Written by: HELLBABE😈

Author’s Note: Hey everybody! I hope you enjoyed the story. I know there are some weak spots and the ending sucked. It was super hard to finish idk why I probably could have fixed it but it’s my first story so that’s OK😉! I TRULY HOPE THIS WASN’T A HUGE WASTE OF TIME. I MAY WRITE SOME MORE I’D LIKE TO CONTINUE DOING THIS IT WAS QUITE FUN THANKS EVERYBODY 🖤💜💛💚💙🖤💝

  • Zerroh

    Very enjoyable. Great plot and dialogue. Hope to see others.

  • Edz

    Loved it

  • OwenTurner

    Very good but couple of typos

  • Puddin Tane

    Needs editing. Not too bad, but please, reread your story before posting to look for errors. It would go a long way towards making a good story a great story. Keep it up.

  • Izaya

    Great first story, Hellbabe. While it’s true it needs some editing and reformatting like Puddin Tane said, I was able to read past majority of them, so I enjoyed this.