The Haunted Motel

My friends and I decided to go to a motel for about 7 days. I don’t know why, we just wanted to. I heard that this motel is very… *clears throat* haunted. Jordan replied, “It’s just because they didn’t have money for the motel.”

We went into the motel and got a room with four beds, four TV’s and four consoles of will. We loved our room but the person that gave us the keycard said, “You should have better not done that.”

It was 3:00 AM. I woke up from a weird sound. I screamed, “WAKE UP!!” My friends have woken up and had heard the sounds as well. My friend Maxwell was just playing Earthbound and ignoring the sounds. Me and Jordan went to investigate. While Maxwell was playing, Jack was also playing Mario Kart 64.

“I forgot to got the flashlight, Jordan!”

“What now Jake? Don’t we have a flashlight?”

“No, we only have our phone light.”

While we were investigating, I saw something I can describe how it looked; sharp and long arms, sharp and long feet, and a creepy face. I screamed to my friend, “Run!”

“What’s wrong?”

“I-I just saw a creature running in the room 34!”

“You must be lying.”

“No, I swear I’m not lying!”

My friend heard a weird sound from the room. You guessed it, 34! My friend told me, “Let’s investigate it!” We agreed and went into the room. I saw pizza on the floor and… blood.



“I think that’s blood on the floor.”

“Let me taste it.” Jordan tasted the red stain.

“Umm… EWW, is it ketchup?”

“NO, THIS IS BLOOD!” As soon as he said that, I saw the creature. It jumped at my friend and killed him.

“JORDAN, NO!” I ran out of the room as fast as I could. I quickly went in my room.


“Dude, what’s wrong?”



“It’s true.” I quickly took a picture of it.

“What the f**k?”

All of us heard the sound. We all whispered.

“Dude what should we do?”

“I don’t know guys but I thi-”

The creature breaks our door. We were hiding in the basement. We hear it laughing manically. It jumped into the basement and saw Jack then sliced him in half. Then he saw my other friend and poisoned him, but it didn’t find me. After it went away, I jumped out of the window and injured myself badly. All I remember was me being in a hospital and my mom crying. The motel was closed and never opened again.

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