Stay with Me Forever




NOTE: they’re well be flaws In my grammar due to the fact im not very good with my writing skills or rather my grammar! If you could look past that and enjoy ♡♥




•Reporting live•

Their has been a man believed to be responsible for 22 missing girls, in a recent update it is now reported  23. He is said to be a 22-year-old man, his name has not been confirmed yet. he has black hair, brown eyes. in a clip of a video we caught of him he is seen to be wearing a black suit or uniform which hasn’t been confirmed yet. he could have some mental issues but that hasn’t been confirmed ether. officials released today that those missing girls are now being called murder victims saying; ” after it being over a year of this investigation is safe to classify them under murdered not missing” for the families sake they have asked to not give their names or face’s to the media we reach out to  the families that have faced a tragedy such as this one.

Lizzie: thanks baby for the night it was fun. Baby we should have date night more often your always busy I never get some alone time with my man.

-phone rings-

Lizzie: Who’s calling you babe?

Bf: It’s no one

Lizzie: Than pick it up!?

Bf: don’t worry it’s no one

Lizzie: Give it here than

Bf: I told you to stop

Lizzie: give it here! And if it’s no one you shouldn’t care! Hello?

Caller: Hi baby when you coming over I’m lonely

Lizzie: Sam? Samantha? Why do you have my bf number and why are you calling him? And talking like that?

Sam: LIZZIE!?? sorry wrong number ha.. I feel embarrassed sorry again I meant to call  bf..!

-hangs up-

Lizzie: That was weird anyways good night baby see you tomorrow!

-kiss-

Bf:  night!

-opens door to the house-

Lizzie: mom dad I’m home! Mom, dad?

-sees a man-

Lizzie: who are you  and why you here!?

Wow so many questions  don’t worry dear! My name is James and naturally I came for you~

Lizzie: wait, wait what are you doing

-Lizzie gets nocked out-

Lizzie : where I’m I.. WERE I’M I!!?

-laughing-

h-hi I’m so happy to see your awake

Lizzie: where are my parents you f*****g little s**t

JUST FORGET THEM.. you don’t need friends, boyfriends, or a family all they do if hold you back… hold us back! they smile to show their love, joy, excitement but all they really are, are just fake smiles the ones you see through, but with me you wouldn’t even have to doubt mine because mine is genuine. they talk behind your back make fun of you and use you. they feed you lies “I’m here for you” “I love you” we sick out for each other” THEY DON’T MEAN IT, THEY COULD NEVER LOVE YOU AS MUCH AS I DO! THEY DON’T KNOW WHAT IT MEANS TO TOUCH YOUR BODY, TO SEE YOU AND TALK TO YOU EVERYDAY THEY BRUSH IT OFF LIKES ITS NOTHING. T-they don’t know what it means to… watch you from your window, to watch when you make love to a man who doesn’t really love you, to see your so-called friend kiss the very same man on the lips…

LIARS, LAIRS THATS ALL THEY ARE YOU DONT NEED THEM YOU HAVE ME!!!! ha-haha-HAHAAAAAA that’s why I have taken the liberty of killing them. their tongues the very same ones that lied to you, their eyes the very same ones that looked upon you than at another with the tensions of leaving you for them, their lips the same ones that touched yours along with the 2 other girls, their fingers the same ones that touched you, your fathers d**k the same one that he used to do unsightly things to you along with your sister not to mention  his mistress’s. last but not lest their hearts for yours has been one that had been broken one to many times not even their hearts could make up for those times, their all gone don’t you see I cut them out so you don’t ever have to worry about those humans… pigs hurting you again! and if you ask me those parts… limbs know their life’s is a small price to pay. you don’t have to live in fear, “we” don’t! because that’s what love is, eliminating the ones who hurt my darling, my love… my LIFE.

Lizzie: -sobbing-

Darling don’t cry.

Lizzie: Y- YOU CRAZY B*****D WHO THE F**K ARE YOU!? L- LET ME GO YOU PERVERTED STALKER! SOMEONE PLEASE ANYONE SAVE ME FROM THIS MURDER THIS CRAZY LITTLE S**T!

stalker I-im not a s-stalker… S-SHUT UP ITS NOT TRUE, ITS NOT TRUE IT CANT BE.. it’s not called stalking standing from ones window and watching them dress or go the place’s they go its called love.. y-yes love because that’s what I think of you I love you.. or maybe its more.. i adore you I know everything about you.. yes and the people I killed was out of love because that’s what love does to people.

Lizzie: you make me sick your more of a creep than I thought. you killed my mom, dad, sister, my two friends, my boyfriend just who the f**k do you think your messing with, right when I escape you will pay! my family’s name is nothing to mess around with. my parents are wealthy and have an honorable name! right when I get out I’ll get the judge to throw you in jail were you belong! I HOPE YOU DIE IN THERE b*****d. -sobbing-

escape..?

Lizzie: you heard me b*****d!

you want to leave me after all I have done!? tsk-tsk well I can’t have my Darling running off on me now so.. I’ll have to make it were we can be with each other forever.

-Picks up a gun-

Lizzie: no.. no, NO ILL DO ANYTHING YOU WANT, YOU WANT MONEY LET ME GO AND I WILL GIVE YOU IT ALL FOR GOD F*****G SAKE LET ME GO! ILL DO ANYTHING!!!! YOU WANT TO TOUCH ME YOU CAN, ILL EVEN HAVE S*X WITH YOU JUST LET ME GO! LET ME GO YOU F*****G B*****D YOU FREAK I ODER YOU NOW. -sobbing-

You see my love, you are quite a spoiled little b***h, And that mouth of yours it needs to be washed out! You  see I’ve never been to fond of a girl with a dirty mouth. And you think I would touch you in that way never in a million years.. To say the least you make me sick the flaws of my lovely Queen are quick to show, my once beautiful Queen if nothing but an ugly begin in fact your like all the others a nasty pig! well it was fun dear, and well do forgive me.

-gun shot-

(1 mother) jenny Johnson ~ (1 dad) Joe Johnson ~ (1 sister) penny Johnson ~ (2 friends) Sam and Hayley ~ (1 boyfriend) Jackson ~ and the crowned princess Lizzie Johnson all knocked off the list plus a few other people who were Rather use less..

Lizzie my dear what a waste.. its ok I’ll add her to my collection of perfect dolls.. 23 dolls later and still nobody See’s my love, no they couldn’t handle it.

I forget when did I start this? That’s right how could I forget, after my parents leaving me on the streets in hope I’d die that’s when I saw him, I saw a man looking at a women’s window, at  the time I was to young to know what love meant nor did I know what he was doing. soon the man climbed up and opened her window I got closer and watched the whole thing. the girl grabbed her pillow and tried to fight the man that’s when  it happened he snapped her neck than he left leaving her with a kiss  placed on her cheek.  I couldn’t stop looking at her cold dead eyes how beautiful she looked that’s when it hit me that’s what love looks like she just couldn’t handle it.. no she didn’t deserve it! Something snapped I thought no wonder my parents left me to die it was out of love if it wasn’t  for love I wouldn’t have seen what a saw that night I wouldn’t have discovered the true form of love



Hello! Young Lady, yes you! what do you say do you want to stay with me forever?



 

  • Konner

    This was the first time I saw someone put “know” when it should of been “no” instead of the other way around.

  • ShYgUy

    This story was a bit hard to follow. The premise was a serial killer stalking Lizzie correct?

    The idea is nice. Typical serial killer obsession turned to murder, but the story was written like a script or screenplay formatting instead of usual first or third person. The flow wasn’t there, so it was hard to read. Work on the flow of your stories. Take your time.

    I enjoyed the concept though.

    Keep writing. 🙂

    • CrazyKoo Ninja

      I completely agree! It caught me a bit when it was written as a screenplay instead of first or third person view. I also noticed how there was kind of a lack of detail, but other than that, it’s pretty good!

  • Simon

    Yeah, this first-person narative/theater script-style of writing is not very good. Kinda like this story…

  • Arianna Jones

    This is a great story developed by how the murderer see’s love in his eyes. Many people out there don’t accept peoples love from how they treat love as.

  • Konner

    You’re the only other person on here I’ve saw that has their username as just their first name.

  • Konner

    Not to be racist but since it was an anime person on the cover I want to say they are Japanese or some sort of Asian.

  • Haylee

    I honestly fell in love with the murderer. He seems like a total sweet heart, just doing what he thinks is right. I really love this story. You should totally continue writing screenplay style. All the people that criticize this, ignore them! This kinda writing isn’t common, and it is super interesting. Even more interesting when written in screenplay style. ❤❤❤

  • Haylee

    Sammme!