The Creature of the Snow

Mason and his buddy George were driving along a shady road after seeing a football (American) game. It was snowing like crazy, but at least the weather held out through the whole game. Mason’s headlights were the only beam of light in the dark pearly white road. George drank a few beers and was starting to fall asleep, when a speed bump woke him up.

“Huh what?”

“Just a speed bump” Mason continued to drive when a figure ran in front of the road, hitting the car and cracking the windshield as it tumbled across the car.

“Oh my God what was that.”

“I don’t know shut up! I’ll check it out!” Mason grabbed a baseball bat just in case and walked out. “Are- are you okay?” A long bony arm reached out and started to choke Mason as it lifted him up. The creature stood up and spiders like legs came out of it’s back and stabbed Mason. His skin started to dissolve as his life was taken away. The creature dropped a bony Mason, and turned into him. The creature stepped into the car.

“So what happened?”

“Nothing. Just a deer. You can crash with me.” The creature drove the car along the road, until it suddenly rammed into a tree. A limb of the tree stabbed into George’s chest, killing him instantly. The creature stepped out of the car and wandered into the forest.

  • Jai Lynn

    Needs to be a part 2 to this story

  • Puddin Tane

    Too quick. He’s driving along, suddenly, I’m guessing, “slenderman” comes out of nowhere and the driver is dead. End of chapter 1. No build up. Hope chapter 2 is a whole lot better.