The Mask

I went in the forest to play with my throw out knives with my friend and we started playing with them.

Me: Hey dude want to do a blood oath?

Gavin: Yeess that would be awesome!

Me: Sweet, I cut my hand and I cut his hand right in the middle.

Me: Well here to the blood oath, then we both shock hands, and as soon as we did it we heard a rule in the bushes, we both looked at the bushes fast.

Me: Well then?

Gavin: That was weird!?

Me: That was… well let’s continue.

Gavin: Yea!!

Then we did it…

10 minutes later

We were still playing and we were still hearing rustling in the bushes.

Me: Oh my god what is that?! Ughh.

Gavin: I know right! Want to go check it out.

Me: Suurree.

I went to go check it out and I move the bushes to see and I see a creepy mask.

Me: Huh?

Gavin: What is it?

I pick it up.

Me: A… mask?

Gavin: Well we can throw the throwing knives at it!

Me: Know that’s what I’m talking!

I set it on a table, I grab a throwing knife it and it bounced right off.

Me: What the?

I do it again and it bounces right off again

Me: Okie then…

Gavin: Uhhh?… well the we will just use it as a mask then…

Me: Okie you can put it on then.

Gavin: Really!

Me: Yeah I don’t care

Gavin: Sweet!!!

Then he put it on and his soul got sucked into the mask.

Me: Gavin??

Does not respond.

Me: Gavin!!!

The End…

  • Daniel Di Benedetto

    That was horrible. It was written so poorly, I’m surmising you typed it all out on your phone? No character development, no ominousness, no rationality. All it had was a lame ending.

    • Puddin Tane

      Thank you saving me the trouble of reading it. The star rating clues me in, but then I also check out the comments. Sometimes people will give all kinds of praise to a story that is so crappy I have to wonder if I read the same story. I think I’ll give this one a TRY. But I can’t promise anything.

    • wifey30

      Your story, Summer Sky, was No better!! You have No right to judge.

      • IronMosquito

        Hey, next time you try to tell someone off, make sure to correct your capitalization.

        • wifey30

          No, it’s for emphasis. Idiot. 😂

          • IronMosquito

            Alright, buddy.

      • Daniel Di Benedetto

        You are disturbingly petty, and while it’s quite humorous to spectate, I strongly suggest you go back to your sixth grade Minecraft server.
        Also: *no, *!, *no

  • IronMosquito

    WhOOoooOOo SpOokY

  • Puddin Tane

    Yeah. Just doesn’t make sense. Why would a mask cause the bushes to “rustle”? I don’t know what to say. Just not well thought out.