The Visit

The masked man hovered over my misery-strickened face, his tool securely intertwined between his fingers. An apron draped over his body stained with trickles of blood from his last victim. If it were up to me, I would’ve given him a good right hook and high-tailed it out of there, but the sadistic prick had strapped me to the table. Even through his worn down mask, I could see a smile decorating his crooked face.
“Now, open wide.”

He forced his tool betwixt my lips. The cold, stannic taste almost made me vomit. He forcibly propped open my reluctant mouth with his slimy fingers and touched the tip of the tool to one of my teeth.
“Don’t worry, this will only hurt a little.” From the moment he took hold of my tooth, I knew he was lying. He yanked at my tooth with the force of a powerful magnet, copious amounts of blood sprayed from my mouth and added to his demented apron decorations.

My screams of terror go unheard by his ears as he rips the tooth from my mouth. I stare wide eyed as he held it above my gaze. Just when I thought it was over, he reached his tool in a second time, forcing out yet another tooth. I felt weakened by my torture, drifting in and out of consciousness. Tears ran down the sides of my cheeks. I wished repeatedly for my pain and suffering to finally end. Any hopes of getting out of this alive went down the drain when he brought out his final tool.

He crept his tool closer and closer before jabbing it in, drilling into my mouth like a madman. I flailed around trying desperately to get free, unfortunately he had an accomplice strong enough to hold me down. I stared into the blinding light above me, hoping that I’d make it out in one piece. Before long I was released from my horizontal prison, my torment was finally over. As I was walking out of the torture chamber, I heard his twisted, demented voice call out to me.
“Remember to floss from now on.”

Man, I hate the dentist

  • SkullNboNes

    Had instant regret after posting this, but was a bit too late lol

    • Mr. Phase

      You shouldn’t lol. It was short but amusing to read. It was a nice little concept and that’s pretty much how I always felt about the dentist. I found it to be good though, although I’m just some person.

      • SkullNboNes

        Lol thanks, I didn’t actually think anyone would like it. I’m actually terrified of the dentist so this is really relatable for me

  • Ray Ramirez

    I thought it was great, shouldn’t feel regret

    • SkullNboNes

      Thanks! I don’t know why I was so afraid to share this, maybe because of the length?

      • Ray Ramirez

        Short and sweet, did it’s job by being creepy without any extra stuff. You’re an amazing writer, you made a trip to the dentist into a horror story. As always, keep up the good work.

        • SkullNboNes

          Thanks! I appreciate that

  • Nameless

    Lol so true

  • Nyelli

    Lol. It was scary at first, but then it was hilarious at the end when he said he hates the dentist.

    • SkullNboNes

      Haha, glad it made you laugh

      • Nyelli

        I’m glad too. These stories are my life! I love them so much!

        • SkullNboNes

          Good to hear!