The Doll – Chapter 3 Teaser Prologue

“So, Mr. Andrew? You wanted to talk to me?”

He had finished talking to the student and had sat at his desk as I had walked up to him. “Ah, yes, Mr. Anderson-”

“Um, you can just call me Cameron, or just Cam.”

“Oh, alright… Cameron. Anyways, I wanted to speak to you about that doll. Did you happen to take it from the graveyard?”

I nodded, and put my hand in my pocket. I had felt something in there earlier, although I wasn’t sure what it could be. Mr. Andrew gestured for me to take a seat. “What about it?”

“You still have it, am I correct?”

I shifted in my seat uneasily. “Well… um sir… I… I left it at home…”

I glanced at the floor nervously, not wanting to say that I had thrown it out in the trash. I slouched a bit in my seat, gazing at the floor.

“Ah… may I ask what is in your pocket?”

I sat up and looked at him, confused. “What do you mean?”

“…There’s something in your pocket…?”

I pulled out what I had felt earlier and my eyes grew wide. The Doll had come back. But that’s stupid Cam, you threw it in the trash!!! There weren’t any signs of dirt or debris from a trash can, and the muslin looked as it did when I found it in the graveyard. Out of shock, I threw the doll far from me.

“Um… m-may I be ex-excused?”

He nodded, looking at me strangely and I dashed out the class. I ran to the bathroom and puked in the urinal. How in the world did it get in my pocket?!

I stood over the urinal, holding onto the side walls for stability. I slowly went to the sink and washed my face. I glanced at the mirror and stared at my face. My vision blurred after a while, and I rubbed my eyes to focus. I turned around, and saw black vines wrapping around the door frame of the bathroom, and black ink running down the floor of the hallway. Panicking as the ink oozed into the bathroom, I tried to run out of the bathroom, but the ink oozed up my body, sending shocks of agonizing pain of needles and nails. I screamed for help, trying to move, struggling to breathe as the ink oozed around my chest, crushing my ribs, stabbing my lungs. Soon the ink covered my head, and down my throat, suffocating me. I felt a lightheadedness and somehow I fell to the ground and passed out.

  • Madalina Mihaela Vasilescu

    This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read, can’t wait for the rest of it!!! 5 🌟

  • Tristan Seaburg-Sweat

    Is it me or do your chapters get shorter and shorter? This had been such a good read plz keep it up, I do wish you’d write more so it would be longer then a paragraph..

    • Moony Brooklight

      This is just a prologue, it will be a while before I finish this chapter. I’m hoping to write way more than my other chapters(in docs my first chapter was 4 pages, the second was 3 1/2 pages, so far chapter three is 1 1/2 pages). Don’t worry! I will be writing a lot and I’ll try to make the chapters longer. It’s just really hard when I already know the ending for my book lol.

    • Madalina Mihaela Vasilescu

      He/She wrote down “Teaser”, tho’…

      • It’s she, and thank you for clarifying that for everyone! ^^

        • Madalina Mihaela Vasilescu

          No worries, I only found it odd, as long as it was written down…

      • Tristan Seaburg-Sweat

        Lol I swear I think I read everything to nope didnt see the teaser part ugh but hey I’m blonde so ehh

        • Madalina Mihaela Vasilescu

          Hehe, I’m a blonde too lol

  • Insaneic_the_Insane_666

    Ok another cliff hanger it’s awesome your the new Darren Shan or Steven King, always keeping us on the edge of our seats. But my girlfriend has been traumatized by Annabel I don’t hink she’ll want to read this

    • Moony Brooklight

      lol thanks so much!

    • Dollface Salem

      Omg, thank you, but I don’t think I’m that good of a writer! I can understand being traumatized by that movie, I’ve never watched it, but I’ve seen the trailers, and it really is creepy.

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  • Moony Brooklight

    Thank you so much everyone!! It makes me so happy to actually have a 5 star rating(actually like the first time ever!). When I finish this novel however, I plan to start writing short creepypastas, since this has been taking more time, and getting in the way of my schoolwork. Again, thank you all so much, and I hope to talk to you all again! -Dollface Salem

  • K

    Amazing!! I just want more!! Haha keep up Thr good work!

  • PurplexiaSphinx

    *leans in* And then? 👀