Beg for Forgiveness – Part 1

13th of January 2020

You’re in the house of your loved brother Alan. He is missing for a few months now. You are inside his house with a few cops to find some evidence. It looks really old and haunted here.

You go to his bedroom. There is a small bed in the right corner with a small dresser next to it. There is a chair in the left corner and a book: “How to lie”

You see a piece of paper on his bed and you go looking what it is. It’s a letter. You go sit on the bed and start reading.

***

Hello, you found my letter.

Excellent. I left it for you. I’m sorry I wasn’t able to join the marriage. I had some business to finish. I know what you’re thinking; what kind of business would be more important than the marriage of your own brother?

I’m finally able to tell you it :

The truth

You know I always had friends with bad behaviours. I should have listened to you. You were the only one who knew from the start that they would cause trouble in the future. And you were damn right, Shawn. If I would have listened to you, I probably would be still alive. You are reading it well, I’m probably dead. To make a long story short: they killed me.

Maybe its hard to believe that im not joking after all the years being a clown, but I’m serious. It started in July. Do you remember Gale? That tall dude with the blue dyed hair and the tattoos? Well he was a big problem. He told me to come with him. I had to help with some ‘gang business’. I would have known that wasn’t even MY business. But he was almost dragging me into his car so I couldn’t resist. He brought me to the old factory at the lake. When we were in they locked me in a room and asked me for something. You already know what, huh? If it is what I guess you are thinking that it is, then you’re right. They asked for the USB-stick you brought home with the name Codename on it. I told them I didn’t know what they were talking about. But they took my phone and they found the picture of the stick in my gallery. I escaped once and I wrote this letter for you.

At the moment that I’m writing this, I hear sounds on the stairs so I need to go but remember me please!

AND THEY ARE COMING AFTER YOU!

ESCAPE NOW WHEN YOU ARE STILL ABLE TO DO IT! GO AS FAR AS YOU CAN FROM HERE! DON’T GIVE THEM THE STICK!

TAKE THE STICK WITH YOU TO THE POLICE!

Alan Walkers

***

You are a little bit shocked about what Alan told you. You hear something on the stairs. Its pretty quiet here…

When you look outside, you see it’s almost evening. You need to go home. You put the letter in your pocket. But you hear sounds downstairs. When you leave the room you see something terrifying…

THE USB-STICK HAS A TRACKER

The phrase is wrote on the wall with a red liquid. Blood…

You hear whispering voices downstairs. But the voice who’s speaking the most is pretty unnatural. It was like nails on a blackboard. It was hard to understand. You go slowly downstairs. But then you see in the darkness the stairs are wet. Blood again. When you want to go around the corner, you see two feet on the floor. A body! Then you hear the nails-and-blackboard-voice again. Its like the person is standing next to you! “There is… no way… we aren’t going to catch… him.” The voice sounds like that the person is having a hard time to talk and breath at the same time. “These cops… were way… too weak.” Another voice: “Do you think we made the right decision taking Alan with us?” “Of…course. When he… sees the message… he will see… Alan’s body…thinking…he’s dead.” Another voice: “And when we caught him?” “We take the…stick… kill the brothers…and leave.” The body on the ground starts shaking. It was Alan. Coughing weak.

He groans in pain. “Ugh he is awake.” Whispers a woman. You see the big wounds and scars all over his dying body. The message upstairs was probably written with his blood. You see someone kicking him in his groin. He almost screams in pain.

What are you going to do?

a: Try to escape and leave Alan for dead.

b: Try to escape WITH Alan.


Author’s Note: A and B are other stories, I’m writing them so please have some patience! They will appear as soon as I’m done.

To be continued…

  • Puddin Tane

    Needs a liitle work. Nice idea for a “choose your own adventure.” Can’t wait to see how it pans out.

  • Eclips

    Thanks for reading, im sorry for my grammar. My first language isn’t English.
    Eclips☆

  • Eclips

    Thanks for reading, im sorry for my grammar. My first language isn’t English.
    Im working on the two ends!☆☆☆
    Eclips☆

  • Sarita Tinsley King

    I enjoyed it thus far, but it definitely needs some revisions.