From Heart to Heart

  • Konner

    Not that bad. Very short and many spelling and grammar mistakes. I wish there was more things to explain the eye patch and why the girl looked just like the main character. Maybe proofread your writing a little more. I rate 2.5 stars

  • DahrknessInTheLight

    Could use a bit more filling. It’s decently written, and seems like it could really go somewhere, but there’s just a few too many dead ends. I like it, however, and would recommend.

  • Miguel Angelus

    Uh… what?