The Dark Web 2 Ch.5 Freakshow

Author’s Note: To Konnor, a chapter just for you since you like it so much.

The immersing darkness grasp its icy grip on her bones, snuggling cozily under her battered skin. Goosebumps trickling among her flesh, she takes a deep breath and begins to walk. There was nothing to assist the aimless path, nothing but blindness accompanied with slight panic attacks. She wanders slowly lifting and setting her bare feet down, being aware of possible traps or wires. There was no method to this madness.

A soft red light dimly begins to glow far away in a higher position. Following it like a North Star she approaches it, the ambience spreads out exposing a window panel inches away from her face. Displayed like a sideshow attraction at a fair it was a small enclosed room with a body strapped to a wooden chair. Multiple lights begin to turn on to her left and right, along with it revealing a row of identical rooms as the hallway she stands in comes to light. Some rooms were occupied, some were empty. Those that were vacant had bolted chairs with muddy stains stained into the grain, some windows had spider designs where it looked as some victims tried to escape, others had greasy handprints trailing down in red. As she walked down one direction she noticed a few rooms had corpses dispayed in them.

One room had a woman with her breasts sliced off, her stomach was torn in half with a doll head sticking out as if to make a surprise appearance. At the top of the window a name was written, AMANDA. At the bottom smeared was BIRTH. Karla assumed it was one of the attractions you could pay to see, Red Rooms and perversions galore treck across the dark web with ease. Whatever gets an untouchable’s d**k hard can be found on it.

Karla receives a despondent yet abhorred feeling dribbling into her conscience, when suddenly she hears a shriek from her left. Hurrying to find the source she’s greeted to a man in a chair shaking his head violently crying, his red eyes tell a tale of pity only a broken soul could relate to. Among the naked floor lay tarnished saw blades, shattered razors, ground drill bits, and angled nails. The top of the window displayed KONNOR, the bottom wrote TIN MAN.

Karla hammers her one fist on the bouncing glass trying to help. A slit vent from above whirls to life along with others lining down both sides of the room. Air blasts in circulating around in different directions and speeds forming a vacuum effect. All the pieces of rubble pick up floating around as the wind picks up. Karla turns away and clenches her wet eyes. Liquid splatters on the pane making loud splashes, screams bounce off the window for a brief period until silence makes its apperance once more.

She turns her face to the wreck that sits before her.

One crooked saw blade rested between his right eye and cheek bone, wedged in with extreme force. The drills bits and nails drove through leaving bleeding chambers, razors stuck out across his body revealing bone and muscle. His body was a mangled collaboration of tortured flesh and scrap. He chokes a bit with a rusted nail piercing his tongue to his lower jaw. Drooling out pink slobber he then rests his chin on his chest, blood pools at the base of his feet.

Backing away she presses her back against a wall that folds in with her light amount of force. Toppling backwards she lands scraping her elbows onto a rough surface. Aching in pain she rolls onto her belly and sees her face staring back at her. As the lights from above flicker to life she sees her apperance duplicate around.

Standing up she sees herself, half naked and afraid, a stump where a hand once was, crusted blood stains stamped across her skin.

Her form being pushed aside a thing comes into view appearing across all the mirrors. His lower jaw was extended creating an over bite with shallow teeth, the arms were long drifting past his waist with fungus claws, a deformed head made it abnormally shaped, to top it off it was abnormally muscular. He looked like a product of i****t and steroids, his glossy eyes penetrated her soul from every direction. Spinning around she couldn’t tell which one was really him and which was a mere reflection.

She tries to steady her shaking arm and twirls trying to stay as close to the center of the mirror maze as possible. The being licks his chops with a yellow faded tongue and leaps forward. She drops down to her knees as he lands on top of her from an unknown direction.

His thick nails scrape into her tender cheeks running blood into her open mouth. His erection bulges into her lower back as he laughs, she swings back with both arms.

He grabs onto her stump and forces it into his salivating mouth, biting down he pulls a heavy clump of skin and muscle away as fresh blood squirts into his throat. Writhing in agony she lets her weight pull her down to the floor, her arm slipping through his graps using blood as a lubricant.

She kicks a mirror nearby shattering it into bits. A wider piece glimmers on the floor, quickly grabbing it she’s tackled once more as the deformed man climbs on top of her. His breath stinks of raw meat like gangrene is rotting his belly in slow strokes, a cannibal born of i****t. She strikes the shank into his throat and pushes with all her might, screaming as blood spurts out into her eyes and hair. All the while her mouth stays open, partially screaming from pain, the other feeling from blistering anger being released.

He drops onto her in a slow slump, she pushes him off and stands up facing the mirrors once more.

Cameras in dark corners rotate and zoom in to her, a crackling sound through speakers push through with a deep voice.


  • ShadowsGather

    Lovely, keep up the good work

    • Ray Ramirez

      Had to gather more ideas for what happens next but a magic show will be the next chapter. Thank you btw

  • KoreanLotion

    This is awesome. Me and my friend enjoy these stories alot. Thank you so much ❤

    • Ray Ramirez

      Awesome I’m glad y’all enjoy them thank you

  • Konner

    This was so good that I didn’t even mind that you spelled my name wrong… And killed me. No, it’s okay. I’m used to people spelling my name wrong. XD

    • Ray Ramirez

      Haha you’re welcome. Working on the next chapter soon

  • Dylan

    hey ray if you dont mind i would like to use one of your ideas in a story i am creating and i will gladly give you a spot in my story if you allow me to use your idea ( not trying to make it sound like i am bribing you )

    • Ray Ramirez

      By all means go for it brother, no need to give me a spot or anything 🙂

      • Dylan

        Thank You Ray I Appreciate it . oh and If you were curious of the idea i took it was the pigpie and the dark web thing 🙂 the story is called The Invasion and I will give you a heads up when creepypasta publishes my story if you want to read it (;

        • Ray Ramirez

          No problem and okay awesome possum. Let me know when it gets posted I wanna read it 🙂

          • Dylan

            ill be sure to let you know i love how gory and detailed your stories are especially your dark web series i nearly have read all of your dark web stories in less than an hour keep up the good work 🙂 you have yourself a handy dandy friendly neighborhood subscriber/friend on your hands 😉

          • Ray Ramirez

            I’ve written a lot of stories but when I added gore most people I personally knew lost interest cause they got grossed out by it. I couldn’t believe people on here liked that stuff like I do lol well I’m glad you like em, I’m always up for making new friends on here

          • Dylan

            not to be weird but do you have kik?

          • Ray Ramirez

            Sure its RayRamirez4299

          • Dylan

            umm i have a question. how long does it usually take creepypasta to post a story?

          • Ray Ramirez

            Depends, sometimes its a day or two sometimes it takes a week. I guess it depends on how many stories they have to go through?

          • Dylan

            okay thank you

          • Ray Ramirez

            No problem

  • Johnnyboy

    Thank you for writing this! Me and my friends all read this series. And ive had a few sleepless nights because of this book:D

  • Ray Ramirez

    Haha thanks! Working on Ch.6 tonight after I get off work. Ch.7 will be the end of the series though

  • Lisa Cook Massey

    Loved the first DW series, was pleased to start on the DW2. I got to chapter 5 and am now anxiously awaiting 6&7 to find what fate awaits Mya and Karla. These are some of the creepiest stories I’ve read, and I can’t get enough. Keep up the good work.

    • Ray Ramirez

      Thank you so much I really appreciate that! Ch.6 The Magic Show should post either in 2 or 3 days. I submit it a couple of nights ago.

      • Ray Ramirez

        Sorry I tried to like the comment and it keeps saying I didn’t, not trying to be weird if it keeps liking and unliking

  • Cari

    enthralled. reading one by one the last two hours. one question though? what is i****t?

    • Ray Ramirez

      Thanks! It was supposed to be inc*st but it got censored